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Suite au travail sur le vocabulaire du mardi 2 juin, à vous de m'écrire 5 phrases sur votre routine matinale - on va dire avant d'aller au collège, même si par les temps qui courent cela paraît fort étrange...

Consignes à respecter :

1/ Vous aurez besoin des mots de liaison First / Then / After / Next / Finally pour ordonner votre court paragraphe.

2/ Vous rajouterez les heures, écrites EN TOUTES LETTRES, auxquelles vous faites telles et telles actions.

3/ Vous pourrez aussi dire si vous faites ces actions rapidement (quickly) ou lentement (slowly).

ENSUITE :

1/ Tu m'envoies ton texte en commentaire sur cette page agenda du site (c'est juste en-dessous) pour que je puisse le corriger.

2/ Tu reprendras ma correction sur cette page d'agenda pour recopier le texte dans ton cahier.

3/ Enfin, il faudra apprendre ton paragraphe par coeur.

 

Commentaires (19)

RAYNAUD Soizig
  • 1. RAYNAUD Soizig | 05/06/2020
Voilà mon texte :
First , wake up and get up quickly at sixty fifteen
Then , I have breakfast slowly at sixty twenty
After, I get dressed slowly at sixty forty-five .
Next , I brush my teeth slowly at sevent five .
Finally , I go to school at eight to eight .
Passez une bonne journée !
hey-teacher
  • hey-teacher | 05/06/2020
Hi Soizig. Thank you for your text, it is perfect except for SEVEN ! Have a nice weekend.
lecardeur jade
  • 2. lecardeur jade | 05/06/2020
First , wake up quickly then get up and make my bed five past seven. After get dressed slowly . I prepare breakfeast with eat cereal and drink juice fifteen past seven . Then wash my face and com my hair thirty seven past seven . Finnaly ,take the bus,forty five to eigth . Passer une bonne journée.
hey-teacher
  • hey-teacher | 05/06/2020
Hello Jade Voici ton texte corrigé : First , I wake up quickly then I get up and I make my bed five past seven. After I get dressed slowly . I prepare breakfast. I eat cereal and drink juice at fifteen past seven . Then I wash my face and comb my hair at thirty seven past seven . Finally , I take the bus at forty five to eight . Take care, see you soon
cyprien drapier
  • 3. cyprien drapier | 05/06/2020
First, I wake up at seven o'clock .
Then, I get dressed quickly .
After, I eat cereal slowly .
Next, I brush my theeth and comb my hair .
Finally, I go to school .
hey-teacher
  • hey-teacher | 05/06/2020
Hi Cyprien You did well except you must write TEETH, not THEETH. Bye for now
BORDERIE Elona
  • 4. BORDERIE Elona | 05/06/2020
First, I get up quickly at twenty five to seven.
Then, I get dressed at slowly twenty to seven.
After, I have breakfast at ten to seven.
Next, I brush my teeth and comb my hair at seven five.
Finally, go to school by bus.
hey-teacher
  • hey-teacher | 05/06/2020
Hello Elona It is a very good paragraph. You just need to change these two elements : "slowly at" et rajouter le sujet I devant 'go' à la fin. Bon week-end
BOISSOU Axelle
  • 5. BOISSOU Axelle | 05/06/2020
First , I get up quickly at six thirty.
Then , I get dressed ,
After , I have breakfast at seven o'clock.
Next , I brush my teeth and I comb my hair .
Finally , I go to school by bus.

Bonne journée et à bientôt :)
hey-teacher
  • hey-teacher | 05/06/2020
Hi Axelle ! Your work is perfect, thank you. Hope to see you soon. Bye
BOISSOU Axelle
  • 6. BOISSOU Axelle | 05/06/2020
Bonjour monsieur voilà mon texte !!
Mila Ranouil
  • 7. Mila Ranouil | 05/06/2020
first ,get up is six thirty-five ,go to lunch ,after brush my hair thinly teeth I wash my face .I get dressed .I take my school bag and finally , I go up to my bow bus
hey-teacher
  • hey-teacher | 05/06/2020
Hello Mila Voici ton texte corrigé : First I get up at six thirty-five and I have breakfast. After I brush my hair, my teeth and I wash my face . I get dressed . I take my school bag and finally , I take my school bus. Take care, have a nice week-end
Manon Negrello
  • 8. Manon Negrello | 05/06/2020
First, I get up slowly at six forty five.
Then, I get dressed,
After, I have brekfast at seven o'clok.
Next, I brush my teeth at past half seven
Finally, I go to school at seven fivty!
hey-teacher
  • hey-teacher | 05/06/2020
Hello Manon. Juste 3 fautes d'orthographe à corriger : breakfast / clock / fifty See you
villeneuve ambre
  • 9. villeneuve ambre | 05/06/2020
First, wake up slowly at quarter to seven.
Then, at seven, get dresses
After, at seven past ten, have breakfast quikly.
Next, comb my hair, at seven past twenty.
Finally, go to school, a twenty to eight.
hey-teacher
  • hey-teacher | 05/06/2020
HI Ambre. Voici ton texte corrigé : First, I wake up slowly at quarter to seven. Then, at seven, I get dressed. After, at seven past ten, I quickly have breakfast . Next, I comb my hair at seven past twenty. Finally, I go to school at twenty to eight. See you, take care.
Pierre Hody
  • 10. Pierre Hody | 04/06/2020
First, I get up slowly at six thirty.
Then, I have a shower quickly at fifteen to seven.
After, I have breakfast at seven o'clock.
Next, I brush my teeth quickly at quarter past seven.
Finally, I go to school at half past seven.
hey-teacher
  • hey-teacher | 05/06/2020
Hello Pierre Your paragraph is perfect. All the best !

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