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TRAVAIL A FAIRE  POUR LE SAMEDI 6 JUIN MAXIMUM

Suite au travail sur le vocabulaire du mardi 2 juin, à vous de m'écrire 5 phrases sur votre routine matinale - on va dire avant d'aller au collège, même si par les temps qui courent cela paraît fort étrange...

Consignes à respecter :

1/ Vous aurez besoin des mots de liaison First / Then / After / Next / Finally pour ordonner votre court paragraphe.

2/ Vous rajouterez les heures, écrites EN TOUTES LETTRES, auxquelles vous faites telles et telles actions.

3/ Vous pourrez aussi dire si vous faites ces actions rapidement (quickly) ou lentement (slowly).

ENSUITE :

1/ Tu m'envoies ton texte en commentaire sur cette page agenda du site (c'est juste en-dessous) pour que je puisse le corriger.

2/ Tu reprendras ma correction sur cette page d'agenda pour recopier le texte dans ton cahier.

3/ Enfin, il faudra apprendre ton paragraphe par coeur.

 

Commentaires (17)

Lambros Léo
  • 1. Lambros Léo | 05/06/2020
Bonjour Mr, voici mon texte :

Y make up and make m'y bed at seven o c' lock.
First, Y get dressed, Y wash m'y face and comb m'y hair. He is quarter past seven.
After, Y prépare and Y have my brekfast.
Next, Y brush my teeth. He is ten to eight.
Finally, Y put on my coat and my shoes quickly,
Y take my school bag and Y go to school.
hey-teacher
  • hey-teacher | 05/06/2020
Bonsoir Léo, Très bon texte mais attention à tes I, pas Y. M'Y n'existe pas, c'est MY et on ne dit pas 'He is ten to eight' mais 'it is...'. Take care
mahawa
  • 2. mahawa | 05/06/2020
First i get up quarter to seven after i eat my breakfast then i get dressed.
after i taking the bus.finaly go to scool .next i work
hey-teacher
  • hey-teacher | 05/06/2020
Hi Mahawa VOici ton texte corrigé : First I get up at quarter to seven. After I eat my breakfast then I get dressed. After I take the bus. Finally I go to school and I work. Have a nice week-end.
Pierre Bignaud
  • 3. Pierre Bignaud | 04/06/2020
First, at six forty-five I wake up slowly
Then, at seven, I get up and I have breakfast
After, at seven twenty , I brush my teeth quickly,
Next, at seven thirty, I get dressed,
Finally, at seven forty six, I go to bus quickly for the school.
hey-teacher
  • hey-teacher | 05/06/2020
Hi Pierre Your paragraph is very good. Une chose à modifier à la fin : I quickly take the bus to go to school Have a nice week-end
pons victor
  • 4. pons victor | 04/06/2020
First I wack up at seven o'clock
Then I take a shower at seven five.
Next I'm dressing up at seven fifteen.
After I eat my breakfast and I brushe my teeth it is seven thirty.
Finally I go to the colleige ten minutes before eight o'clock.
hey-teacher
  • hey-teacher | 05/06/2020
Hi Victor, how are you ? Les erreurs à corriger : WAKE / GET DRESSED / BRUSH / SCHOOL (pas college). Take care
loine rego
  • 5. loine rego | 04/06/2020
First , I wake up slowly at six thirty .
Then , I go to the kitchen for eat cereal at six forty .
After , I go to bathroom at seven o'clock for brush my teeth and wash my face .
Next , at seven ten I comb my hair quickly .
Finally , at seven thirty I go to school !!!!
Lina Labrune
  • 6. Lina Labrune | 04/06/2020
First, I wake up at seven fifteen .
Then, I get up at seven o'clock.
After, I prepare my breakfast slowly during around five ten minutes, I eat for ten minutes around. I eat cereal and drink orange juice, It is seven ten.
Next, I brush my teeth, wash my face and comb my hair, It is seven twenty.
Finally, I go bus stop at half past seven, who come me search at seven thirty eight.
hey-teacher
  • hey-teacher | 05/06/2020
Hello Lina Il faut que tu remplaces AROUND par ABOUT. et ta dernière phrase doit être ainsi : Finally I go to the bus stop. The school bus takes me to school at seven thirty-eight. See you
Gaspard lehuger
  • 7. Gaspard lehuger | 04/06/2020
I wake up at seven.
Then I get up five minutes later.
After I eat at quarter past seven
I brush my teeth at seven twenty-five and then take the bus at half past seven.
hey-teacher
  • hey-teacher | 05/06/2020
Hello Gaspard. Thank you for your perfect paragraph. See you
Florian delage
  • 8. Florian delage | 03/06/2020
First, I wake up at seven o'clock.
Then, I get up at quarter past seven.
After, I have breakfast at twenty past seven.
Finally, I brush my teeth and I wash my face at half past seven.
hey-teacher
  • hey-teacher | 05/06/2020
Hi Florian Perfect work, thanks again. Take care.
Noah Dikor
  • 9. Noah Dikor | 03/06/2020
First I get up at six fifty five to go to the shower.Then at eleven o'clock I get dressed.After at eleven five I prepare my breakfast.Next at eleven ten I put all my things togethen.Finally at eleven twenty five I go to college.
hey-teacher
  • hey-teacher | 05/06/2020
Hello Noah A modifier : togetheR et I go to SCHOOL car 'college' signifie 'université' en anglais, c'est un faux ami. Take care

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